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Amazing Evening at Biei-Hokkaido


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like the color

some feedback

1 : plane is going to the left  :shouldhav let 2/3 free space in front of the plane

2 nice, I would have push the shadow a little bit for the foreground

5 like that one but this is a pity a part of the building is cut in th forefront

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like the color

some feedback

1 : plane is going to the left  :shouldhav let 2/3 free space in front of the plane

2 nice, I would have push the shadow a little bit for the foreground

5 like that one but this is a pity a part of the building is cut in th forefront

 

Agree 5 should include whole building...too careless for this mistake.

For no.1, actually, i have take another one with more space, but i deleted it since i like this composition more than more space in front of the plane,

Thanks for your feedback.

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I like the way the plane is "departing" - leaving the scene to wherever the viewer imagines. The image is therefore a beginning which is, to me, more challenging than an ending (the plane arriving).

But there is, of course, a rather significant difference between what it "should" be and what I like!

Tim

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