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Iceland the land of fire and ice


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Spectacular scenery!  Cutting in and out from one scenery to another, especially when you are going from say water to fire, I found it jarring. Maybe you can group each environment scenery more or less together and fade in and out of different environments.  Edit out the real time snips of video on some of the clips, they do nothing to enhance the overall production.

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15 hours ago, tadwil said:

Spectacular scenery!  Cutting in and out from one scenery to another, especially when you are going from say water to fire, I found it jarring. Maybe you can group each environment scenery more or less together and fade in and out of different environments.  Edit out the real time snips of video on some of the clips, they do nothing to enhance the overall production.

Thanks! and thanks for the feedback.

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The scenery is spectacular and I think the aerial style works very well here to bring the audience into the environment. The quality of the work is great. On another side, I find the shots are too short and disappear before I can fully connect with them and fully enjoy the scenery. Because they are so short the randomness of the order becomes too noticeable too. I would suggest longer shots and a reordering that can possibly create a sort of narrative just through the order of the shots. A feeble narrative is better than no narrative. Categorizing shots based on their location and scenery type is an idea to try out for this purpose.

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