Portrait with A7ii + Batis 85

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My gear: Sony ILCE-A7ii w/ Batis 85 

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[Dr. Harout]

Not only the photo is superb but also the girl is heavenly beautiful.

Well done.

[christer]

This is a very pleasant looking and beautiful woman. I guess you fancy her quite a lot. Perhaps this makes you somewhat uncritical when you look at this picture and judge its merits.

 

My detached opinion is that the carriage distracts a lot, both the hood behind her and the armrest on the left side of the picture. To solve the problem you should have opened up the lens much more and/or put the model further away from those things that do not add to the picture or to the mood of the picture.

 

Is the model's face in focus? Doesn't look like it. I find it distracting that the pattern of her dress seems to be sharper than her eyes.

 

Speaking of her eyes, what is she looking at with such great interest? Why does she not look at you, or me?